I'm Tired...

by Debbie   Apr 15, 2007


I'm sick; I need a cure.
I looked everywhere, sight obscured.
Sounds and rhythm muffled,
hardly breathing as I swallowed.

I glanced at her; then at you.
Both looked happy, didn't you?
Smiles and laughs resonated
into ears, as I nearly fainted.

Hand in hand you joyously sang;
A familiar melody rang.
It's the tune, yes; it's the tune
we used to sing every high noon.

I'm sick; I need a cure.
I looked everywhere, sight obscured.
Images brought tears in my eyes
Tears slipping as I silently cried.

Standing stiffly when rain poured,
I struggled as the pain roared.
Recollected an intangible refrain,
Sensible thoughts hardly regained.

As one can no longer mesmerize,
and gaze deeply in the eyes
Once again; I realize
I'm tired.

I'm so tired...

© Copyright 2006 by Debbie de Lara

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, very sad and can relate, wonderfully written as always, flowed great and wording was very good, outstanding job, such a pleasure to read your poems, keep it up your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    So far this is my favorite poem. It's beautiful! I can't even think of anything else to say.
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    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Marie

    I love it and totally relate. keep writin chiquita

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    so sad:( but a great poem,
    nice flow and i love the rhyming too.
    I will read some more of your poems today:)
    5/5
    kisses stephanie