Comments : A Story Told A Thousand Times...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Sad but really good. I really liked it and felt a lot of emotions coming from it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anne Garcia

    Oh... my gosh... i am so sorry that was soo sad... wow.. i'm going to add you on my faves... all your poems are good! but man... that's just messed up!

    p.s: thank you for commenting on mines... i really appreciate it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This poem is really sad but really really good. You could tell you put a lot of emotion into it. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by Darien

    Very powerful poem!.. This is your story, but it is always different from someone elses. It may sound the same, but it never really is. I loved the choice of words, and I really liked the title. Life is full of love and pain, and well, love and pain do go hand-in-hand at times. There are good days though. There always is. Otherwise, you would never know what a bad day was.

    Keep your head up hun,
    Life is still full of surprises.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey
    so sad:(, im sorry..
    i hope everything is better nowadays,

    i absolutely love this poem, It was like i could see it happening in front of my eyes..so sad :(
    i have put you in my favorites and I'm going to read some more of you poems.
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow! What a poem, filled with emotion.. the flow was a little off, but it didn't really effect the way of the poem.. I really appreciate you nomintaing my poem for the Weekly Contest. =] Much Love... 5/5

    Ciao~

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    Sad, but amazing...

    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Wow. Very deep, moving, and powerful. Very sad. You convey emotion nicely.

  • 16 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    I like this, i cant really relate to it, becouse i was never abused by my parents as a child. well written and very emotional, but the rhyme scheme seems to be there in parts but not in others. if intentional then i like it. i dont like poems that rhyme just for the sake of rhyming.. great work (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this is really sad and it almost made me cry:[ im really sorry if this happened to you. but it was a wonderfully written poem and it def. gets a 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Wow there was a lot of emotion in this poem. Very sad, great flow, except there were times where it didnt quite go too good but overall its a great piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    This was a good poem some of the lines felt forced and there wasnt as much emotion in it as i would have expected for ive been abused too but it was overall a great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    Well-done. but sad.

  • 16 years ago

    by just a little bit hurt

    Oh my god I think this is the first poem that has ever brought me to tears Lol! damn! What can I say I'd take the beatings for my little sister to!

  • 16 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wow very powerful and amazing use of words...you got talent gurl!! haha =o]

  • 16 years ago

    by Skittle

    Your poem touched the tenderest and most delicate emotions that I have in my heart.

    In plain English, this was good. :)

    Hope to read more from you, and thanks for commenting on my poems as well.

    -Franklin

  • 16 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    I'm glad you used the word survivor because that is exactly what you are. so sorry you had to go through this. xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow, this is so sad, but it is really good... it has so much emotion, and it brought tears to my eyes. Its so sad, and I feel bad for liking the poem, even though it was so full of pain... I loved it...
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jenna grace

    Powerful. moving. inspirational.
    to just say... this was a lovely piece of writing.
    <3333
    i wish i could rate higher. but i cant.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really liked this poem alot the flow was great and the message was really good. I loved the way you drew your reader into the whole picture great job Plot121