Comments : Sweet Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Complete adoration for this one love. quite sad really. but smile and let time mend. :D 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by tyanna

    WOW...I didn't realize you was only 12...Great poem for your age...On the 4th stanza where it says "how sorry they were" Does it mean "how sorry he was???""
    Just wondering cause it kind of through me off...Best of luck hun..
    Tyanna

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I can't imagine u can write this kind of poem at young age.. u really impress me and i admire ur work.. u know how to express how u feel in this poet..

  • 16 years ago

    by Hunter

    This is a great poem! nice flow, and really paints a picture. thanks for the comment by the way

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Wow awesome. it toucces my heart it was realy great work i loved you poem sewwt angel

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    That was amazing! very sweet! great imagery created in the poem! well done. I like the title too :) flow was good keep it up! keep writing! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Omg!!......So sweetly penned!!!....beautiful work,...too good for words....beautiful imagery...kp it up!
    it's soo touching!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This is really cute. I found it to be nicely penned and showed relaly nice emotion. Well done with this poem it was an enjoyable read.
    ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    This is a very cute poem, and now one of my favorites, nicely worded, i loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    OMG !! your so young and your poems are so sophisticated lol hahaha omg cant believe your skill you probs guna be published when youro lder you know. What a great poem hun

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    This is a great poem full of love yet still sad. i really i like. and it made me think

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    5/5
    so good i'm lost for words