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Debbie
What a lovely piece you have written here. Word choices were awesome.

To mystic orbs that had earnestly shed,
A solemn care exclusively for me;
This broken spirit rejuvenated.

This stanza really tugged at my heart.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Beautiful poem thanks for the comment on "Sinful obsession"

"Within warm arms did I stop whimpering,
Thine voice is like the early morning breeze,
With an angelic voice reverberating,
'Twas thy lullaby that soothes me to ease."

Wow. Wish I could even comtemplating writing a poem as terrific as this! Different styles are definetly impressive because there alot harder to write. You have created a masterpiece.

Take Care.

*whoops sorry I meant contemplate*
And I wonder why I cant write poems like this lol
:)

You're writing is fabulous. You should give me some pointers on how to chose words. I don't know how you do it, but your word choice is alway awesome.

I loved how you "reused" words throughout this poem. I think it gave the piece a lot of depth. Also you have an amzing vocab. That for me always makes it that much better. 5/5

marcella

You write soo beautifully in all your poems.. nothing bad to say here
5/5
<3 ang

Wow i really liked this poem it made me think of romeo and juliet

Well! Breathtaking. Ok, so my poetry looks sing-songy, and boring, but it goes to show how I'm always going to stay that way.. lol.. you have made it look so beautiful, and yet, I have no idea how you can fathom the style.. It looks incredibly difficult.. Just goes to show what an amazing poet you are, huh? You made it all connect so beautifully, and it read so graphically. What a wonderful poem. 5/5 without a doubt. Well done. xx