Paradise Within

by Debbie   Apr 15, 2007


I have seen Paradise within your eyes,
As it radiates to me some blessed mirth;
No longer do I need to question why,
For it is my young heart’s glorious rebirth.

Like the freshness of the cool, morning breeze,
I have seen Paradise within your eyes.
I prayed as I bent down on my knees,
“Lord, was it late for me to realize?”

Blazing blissful sparks in your eyes surmise,
As the faint whispers of my heart reverb.
I have seen Paradise within your eyes,
Under the sunlit sky, I’m unperturbed.

Languid loneliness and despair drowned me.
At the time I bid my love with goodbyes,
But because of you, I’m finally free-
I have seen Paradise within your eyes…

© 2006 by Debbie de Lara

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  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is fantastic!!!
    great job
    like always wonderful wording
    and great description
    good job
    thx for the comment
    btw nice new pic
    you look nice in it

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved it. it was amazing. i gave you a 5/5. everything was perfect, the wording, the flow. it was just beautiful. i added you to my fave's hope you dont mind.

  • 17 years ago

    by April McLaren

    Great flow excellent job keep up the good work