Gidson... [Acrostic]

by Debbie   Apr 16, 2007


Gale was Wind when you first came,
Intruding with force the emptiness within;
Dared to deface my languid disdain,
Swiftly like an arrow of mockery and sin.
Oh, how horrible you are to me, dear Fate!
Never to realize this ludicrous love... too late...

© 2006 by Debbie de Lara

Acrostic is a poetry form in which the first letter in each line spells a word.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    "Gale was Wind when you first came,
    Intruding with force the emptiness within;"

    Again, a poetic success. I cannot say more than simply compliment your ability to combine words and the emotion build up your work beholds. Excellent. Very well done :).

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was truely so sweet and amazing, touched my heart and soul with such beauty and love you portrayed in this Acrostic poem. I can tell how much you care for Gidson through this. The emotion of love was really cute and sweet. I think you did a great job with this hunnie. Well done debbers. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by XxWorthlessxX

    Wow. great poem i loved it. keep it up!! 5/5

    `-jackie.

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Well... lol. i'm sorry, but i didn;t really understand your poem all that well, but the flow and vocabulary were esquisite, so it was still really pleasing to read.
    i also liked your use of metaphors in this poem, very well done. 5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    I like acrostic style I think it would be very hard for me to write something like that. good job. :)

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