Is All She Sees

by Ike Dizzle   Apr 16, 2007


Flock of long hair
Heart of Gold
You have a figure
Only God could mold

Gorgeous brown eyes
Rosy pink lips
Beauty over flowing
Through your finger tips

A scorn woman
Betrayed by lust
No more love
No more trust

I came around
She dont trust me
Cause Another Heart Break
Is all she sees

(I suck at love poems but rate it anyway please.)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I thought you did a good job with this. I liked the first two stanzas more than the second two. The hwole thing had a nice flow. I think my favorite stanza was the first one becuase of the rhyme, which I rather liked. I've noticed that you always include a story in your pieces, I like that, and you do it well.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    I WILL NOT ONLY RATE IT BUT I'LL COMMENT AS WELL, THIS WAS GOOD I THINK YOU NAILED IT FOR ME, I DONT EVEN LIKE LOVE STORIES, BUT YOU ALWAYS DO A WONDERFUL JOB AND I HAVE 1 OF UR POEMS AS MY FAVS, ITS THE ONE CALLED "STOP" I LOVED THAT 1.. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    I like it! It's a good poem. Written well with truth behind it. Sometimes after you've been hurt, it takes awhile to trust again. Sometimes you just need someone to show you it's okay. Awesome poem. I love it! :D

    Thanks for the comments! You rock!

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Very powerful and states how i feel :P 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Omg i love this one! u totally dont suck at love poems, quite the opposite in fact. i love the flow and u worded it brilliantly! great poem, u shuld rite more love poems 5/5
    xx