Oh my god you don't suck this poem is great I can feel the emotion in it it is amazing! 5/5

You deff dont suck at poems this is really nice!

U dont suck at writing love poems at all. i think they are reli reli gd.

Good job! This was awesome! I loved that you used brown eyes...normally people say blue... in your last stanza, the correct grammer is "doesn't" instead of "don't". Other than that I thoroughly enjoyed this and the first stanza was awesome!
Charisma*

Great piece with nice rhymes and appropriate selection of words. I loved it 5/5 short n sweet

Well i dont think you suck at it, i think it was good! keep it up vino
*niki*

Well done once again....by the way u don't suck. u can write one for me anytime....lol
but seriously don't stop writing love poems just because u think u suck...because believe me and everyone else who has read it....ur an amazing writer.

Great poem.
it's so simple and it's full of emotion.
any girl would be happy to receive this (or atleast the first 2 stanzas)

Great work,i felt the words completely
thankyou for the comment,i appreciate it
keep it up!
-Lisa

0MG THIS P03M IS R34L G00D I LIK3 IT

This is very interesting cuz no young guys would write like this.. So u r not suck, u just making a million buck out this for girls say, damn it's so sad, need a hug?(hahaha) Wat no girl see in u like that? U are So A-M-A-Z-I-N-G writing love poems!

Omg i love this one! u totally dont suck at love poems, quite the opposite in fact. i love the flow and u worded it brilliantly! great poem, u shuld rite more love poems 5/5
xx

Very powerful and states how i feel :P 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

I like it! It's a good poem. Written well with truth behind it. Sometimes after you've been hurt, it takes awhile to trust again. Sometimes you just need someone to show you it's okay. Awesome poem. I love it! :D

Thanks for the comments! You rock!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I WILL NOT ONLY RATE IT BUT I'LL COMMENT AS WELL, THIS WAS GOOD I THINK YOU NAILED IT FOR ME, I DONT EVEN LIKE LOVE STORIES, BUT YOU ALWAYS DO A WONDERFUL JOB AND I HAVE 1 OF UR POEMS AS MY FAVS, ITS THE ONE CALLED "STOP" I LOVED THAT 1.. =]

I thought you did a good job with this. I liked the first two stanzas more than the second two. The hwole thing had a nice flow. I think my favorite stanza was the first one becuase of the rhyme, which I rather liked. I've noticed that you always include a story in your pieces, I like that, and you do it well.

Brad