Wonderful piece, greatly written. It holds so much beauty within the lines.
My favorite stanza is:
-Those mystic pools fail to reflect deceit-
He held me captive in his earnest glance,
Making my young heart skip a thousand beats.-
This poem is certainly unique and very few could have written it this well I'm sure. I have a hard time attempting to write these poems because I know if one line is off, the whole poem is as well. But you were perfect in everyway and I love the way you make even the hardest of formats look so easy. Amazing job as always 5/5 GG23