Comments : A gift bestowed under the clear blue skies [Terzanelle]

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem thanks for your comment on my poem "Torment" u r correct on what it is about it is also about my battle with dhs. yes I am a single mother

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Oh wow very beautiful I loved it!! Great wording and the flow was excellent. Keep it up! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    How empressive your poerty is... Very beautiful :)

    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    How empressive your poerty is... Very beautiful :)

    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    Ah.. i rememeber my attempt at this format...
    *Shakes head in despair*
    But this!
    This is beautifully set out.
    The wording and the emotion and the rhythm is amazing.
    You've really mastered this style with flair.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Excellent job. such powerful lines. I loved each and every single beat of this poem. Nice job, very interguing write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Excellent job. such powerful lines. I loved each and every single beat of this poem. Nice job, very interguing write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I don't think I could have written a poem, of this format. The word choice, and everything is perfect. You did an excellent job. Keep up the good work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by LiL K

    This is a very unique and wonderful poem! Thanks for your comment on my poem "The Simple Things You Do"..it's very much appreciated! You are pretty young for such an amazing talent; You should get your poems published if you haven't looked into it already.

    ~MuCh LoVe

  • 10 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A wonderful, incredible, powerful poem. Difficult poetry style to master, but it seems as if you have mastered it. Your vocabulary is amazing, and your poem seems to flow quite well. I enjoyed this, and the more I read, the more I enjoyed it. I think this shall go on my fav's.

    Wonderfully written. Keep writing =]

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 10 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very, very nice! so beautiful! good work!
    God Bless

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Superb dear. Beautiful lines
    Awsome rhymes
    Its worth five
    So I give five
    Its flows so well
    Mistakes are nil

  • 10 years ago

    by Sasha

    Nicley written

  • 10 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    wow beautiful, its very unique and i like your writting style, the flow is good as well as the rhyming, excellent work dear, You're have an amazing talent!
    kisses stephanie

  • 10 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Very well done
    5/5
    .x

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is certainly unique and very few could have written it this well I'm sure. I have a hard time attempting to write these poems because I know if one line is off, the whole poem is as well. But you were perfect in everyway and I love the way you make even the hardest of formats look so easy. Amazing job as always 5/5 GG23

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wonderful piece, greatly written. It holds so much beauty within the lines.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Those mystic pools fail to reflect deceit-
    He held me captive in his earnest glance,
    Making my young heart skip a thousand beats.-

    Great job, keep up! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was and excellent poem ,wording was great I loved it m great job , it's all new to me but man it was good , thanks for sharing , your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Mr M

    Very good...I have such a problem writing in this form but you have it down perfectly. Great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Very good, I enjoyed this wonderful piece. Very well done :)