Ah.. i rememeber my attempt at this format...
*Shakes head in despair*
This is beautifully set out.
The wording and the emotion and the rhythm is amazing.
You've really mastered this style with flair.
This is a very unique and wonderful poem! Thanks for your comment on my poem "The Simple Things You Do"..it's very much appreciated! You are pretty young for such an amazing talent; You should get your poems published if you haven't looked into it already.
A wonderful, incredible, powerful poem. Difficult poetry style to master, but it seems as if you have mastered it. Your vocabulary is amazing, and your poem seems to flow quite well. I enjoyed this, and the more I read, the more I enjoyed it. I think this shall go on my fav's.
This poem is certainly unique and very few could have written it this well I'm sure. I have a hard time attempting to write these poems because I know if one line is off, the whole poem is as well. But you were perfect in everyway and I love the way you make even the hardest of formats look so easy. Amazing job as always 5/5 GG23
Wonderful piece, greatly written. It holds so much beauty within the lines.
My favorite stanza is:
-Those mystic pools fail to reflect deceit-
He held me captive in his earnest glance,
Making my young heart skip a thousand beats.-