Jeanne... [Acrostic]

by Debbie   Apr 16, 2007


Jewel-encrusted soul exudes from vigilant orbs
Emanating radiance eludes gloom, I suppose-
A many a time when weary Psyche absorbs
Nameless malady of Mind smearing this prose.
Need not to fret nor be disturbed, my friend.
Even points of perpetuity we shall transcend...

© 2007 by Debbie de Lara
Acrostic is verse in which certain letters such as the first in each line form a word or message.

[For my best friend]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Awesome poem your friend must be some gal lol good job and thx for the comment:):)

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Need not to fret nor be disturbed, my friend.
    Even points of perpetuity we shall transcend...

    Beautiful lines for a friend. How glad Jeanne would be reading this wonderful piece. The wordings are outstanding in this poem. You have very well penned. Max ratings. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    I always enjoy your formed poetry. This one is beautiful :) Great imagery and word choices.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent use of vocab sweets. It's almost got a magical type feel to it.
    I take this is about a friend called Jeanne?
    Beautifully done
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (How come you're other account is no more? =/)

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I read it twice because it was a little confusing, But It was well written and an amazing use of words.
    Great job.

    xox