Comments : Brooding

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This piece is amazing. The fllow is so perfect I feel so small to comment. Its great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Wow this is so so deep...your...wow...anyways nicce!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    The vocabulary in your poems is really the most amazing that i've read here, your details are so magnifecent that they really make your poems a picture, as i read this, i can see and hear it in my mind.
    wow.
    5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so chilling just like every nature poem should be..Putting less words as lines were so succesful
    My fave lines should be;

    I listened in placid glee
    with pensive thoughts

    Good job
    Take care
    From Tricky Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This is a great poem, but the rhyme scheme in the 1st verse was a little off - regardless, the atmosphere you painted was wonderful :)
    Please comment on Falling Off Cloud Nine, True, and any poem that has few quotes. I enjoyed reading your poetry!
    ~claire

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    "Yet lying on green
    pastures,
    I listened in placid glee
    with pensive thoughts
    resonating
    toward nature's
    unspoken melody."

    This stanza made the poem. The imagery is amazing. I love the vocabulary you used, and more, how you used it.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Debbie, again, lovely vocab, a beautiful, powerful write, with awesome imagery
    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Beautiful poem about nature.
    You used the right words and it was a pleasure to read.
    Fantastic poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Enchanting. You capture your theme with a mystic detail that make it wholly effervescent.

    Honestly, this is the second nature poem I've read *and* enjoyed on this site.

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Vibrant rapture and resonant were some me the well chosen words i liked to imagine with it keep it up 5 for it

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was a very beautiful poem and was wonderfully written , you always write beautiful poems and always a pleasure to read , a remarkable job perfectly written with much care and deep inner feelings , keep up the great work my friend,,,, your friend ,Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem again!!!!!!! wow i love your poems they have such great wordings and power mann good job and thx for the comment also lol:):)

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Nicely done. I liked the ending, and the flow was flawless. You're a gorgeous writer.

    I just wanted to say how you seem to use old English in your writing; it's a beautiful thing and you use it so well. Congradulations on that.

    And I love your writings. They're amazing; they leave me where I can't say anything in my comment, and you have no idea how rare that is.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Excellent.....
    wow.......great appreciation for your pretty good expressions.... well done and I really love the style of writings.... 5/5

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Marjan

    Marian, I like the way you penned it. You obviously have an outstanding talent for writing. this is great :)

    Marjan x