Ignorance of Society

by BeautifulxMess   Apr 18, 2007


Ignorance lingers around our minds like bugs in the air.
Drama spreads like a wild fire that can't be contained.
Hearts are broken through words that are lavish cuts.
Best friends are lost over a fight that abide stained.

Society points fingers and badgers the human race.
A bad seed of envy sprouts into an over grown weed.
The garden with life and happiness slowly dies within.
Soil erodes away as the flowers try but can't succeed.

Fights boil over a rage of no common sense to gain.
People talk around like they don't have enough to say.
Heartless remarks are made by who just don't care.
Drama sits upon it's throne as it destroys what's in the way.

Weeping at night as the world never stops alternating.
How could one loose a friend over a fight that hinders?
An open wound can't heal if it annex over the time.
Salt pours in as it tingles the pain that still is tender.

The world is a germ that seems to increase pain.
Society falls like an avalanche of tainted hearts.
Apologies burn into the ground once done and said.
But society doesn't know that we're falling apart.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Like bugsi nthe air, wow what a similie, you use all kinds of language and experiment with it which is really good i dont seem any writers doing this.

    xxx alex xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by stefanie

    Very nice. meaningful. i love it. great job. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    "Weeping at night as the world never stops alternating.
    How could one loose a friend over a fight that hinders?
    An open wound can't heal if it annex over the time.
    Salt pours in as it tingles the pain that still is tender."

    Those lines are very good. You did an amazing job on this poem. The flow was Fantastic. And I loved your word choice. Wonderful job!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was very strong and had such a negative message.. Although I do agree with you on some parts. I also love the metaphores and word choices, perfect it made it very poetic and creative. wonderful work.

  • 10 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    You really have a way with words . The first stanza and the last stanza were definitely my favourite`s . You did an ah`mazing job with this, and everything in this is so true . Nice title choice too ; it says all . I loved it (:
    ..__MiNDYY