Sounds like a day I am sure many have had before...lol

Good job :)
Take Care Cindy

And i guess you would have won the competition with this excellent poem. well done.

5/5 david

That's a really cool poem. Very cute...

Josie

Very nicely done....some days are just beyond words! All the best, Debbie

HAHAHA
Ohhh this made me giggle.
You write humorous poems really well, you should be proud.
I want to see more =D

Lmao! I can't believe i missed this!!
It's excellent!
Some of the lines were a little long compared to others but it's hardly noticable, especially when you're busy giggling, lmao
I hope it wins! You should write in this catagory more often!
5/5
*Gem*

Nice poem, but i dont think the flow was perfect, it could've been better. The ending was incredible, i loved it.

You are really rising here as a great and versatile poet. This is again a very lovely write. Loved the way you presented everything and the theme you selected..well most of us go through it...but its mostly the hangover which make us late.. :o))

great write

all the best and take care

"Traffic is ridiculous, can it go any slow" It should be slower but I know that you put it that way for the rhyme scheme. lol this was such a cute idea I loved it.. and its true what a difference waking up on the right side of the bed can make.

Thats a cool poem :D:D

This is a good poem...I think you could make it shorter....

Haha the BEST. 5/5

Ha ha, I loved it. It's full of sense of humor. I remember this happening to me also. Great job. 5/5

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