Comments : Crystal Blue

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    Great Haiku. Nice word choices.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Great Haiku. When I close my eyes, I can see myself laying on a raft on the cystal blue waters. Relaxing.
    BTW - that was 18 syllables. Just giving you a hard time :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is a wonderful Haiku. The descriptions vividly paint a brilliant picture of the golden sun's reflection on the water--as clear as crystal. Nice work, ma'dear! =]
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very nice! Great choice of word usuage too!

    Natalie``

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Gem,

    I'm sure I have said this to you before, but I so envy those who can write a Haiku. So much beauty wrapped up in so few words. You did a great job on this.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good imagery and word choice. Since the Haiku form is so short, they are sometimes hard to pull off, you have done an excellent job!