Junk food is poison
msg is in all the processed foods

Heartfelt, wonderfully written. Afew grammer and spelling error, but heck we all do that. The word choice was great, the emtion was strong, and I am glad that it had a happy ending for you and your baby. Keep up the good work. 5/5

What a beautiful write.The way I picked myself up and carried on was to love my baby and only my baby ,his every waking moment brought joy ,it was me he first smiled at ,it was me he was to run to when he fell or when he was sick ,and it my hard work thats now proud to say I have a great teenage son ,oh ok at the moment I have the typical teenage attitude.what i mean is his dad is the one who has missed out and lost ,I simply gained something very precious.

Awwww thats such a beautiful poem!!!!i really enjoyed it!!!it was well written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5/5
-lisa =)))

This is a great poem and it sends a great message to all the people who are goin through this situation! I have to have my friend read this! Keep it up 10/5 lol

Lol...this 1 is soooo sweet.very ute write.it's deep,touching,sweet n above all conveys a good message.........n soo well written!,....Great job!
xxPoojaxx

First there is some being rebel to god..and when you proceed reading you understand thing are working out
You really made me feel this
Good job,
Laura

This poem is wonderful and ur a wonderful mother dont let anyone tell u any different!

Very well written poem...and i see that you have alot of poems on here about your child and i think that is amazing....when she gets older im sure she will be so proud that she has a mother who cares enough about her to write so many wonderful poems...excellent job! 5/5.

Wonderful job
though you did have a few grammatical errors
so I might look it over
but otherwise
I loved the message it portrayed
5/5
kaila