Gods test

by crystaljean88   Apr 20, 2007


A life of dreams and love,
Thanking god for sending me an angel from above.

My baby girl is with me in my heart,
I know when she gets big shes gonna be smart.

No doubt about it,
i know what i did,
I had me a beautiful kid.

i wont go wrong by her,
For that fact i swear.
I will be here when she needs me,
to put her in harms way i wouldn't dare.

I will set aside my life to take care of you.
This life is hard,
But i promise to help you make it through.

A bag of diapers,
And more wipes,
And i cant forget.. to buy you those night lights.

I love you baby and i will do my best,
to help you through this tough life,
Soon enough you will be put to gods test.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    This is one of the favorites i have read of your work keep up the good work :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is really good...its sweet...but the flow wasnt that great...and your form wasnt really working..first it was two lines..then two lines again..and then three...and it kinda threw the poem off a little.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle

    Gurl i love this poem its really good keep up the great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful write!it was cute...it portrayed the feelings towards a child in a successful manner..though the flow was li'l off...the poem was cute...5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Raising a child alone is hard I agree but as for that being the main subject driving the poem the title was abit misleading just a thought Plot121

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