I liked it a lot. It says a lot in just a few words. It's short and to the point but doesn't seem blunt as some short poems do. Still had beautiful flow and meaning. Take care xo

I like this. 'Twas okay. But if I may suggest, you should expand it. It seems like a tercet of an even greater poem.
But, even so, I think this short piece is frankly true and beautiful itself.
all the best