Comments : Turning Thirty

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    Very cute.....I'll tell you when the forties come you wish for those thirties back again :)
    Good job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Oh dear lol i have all those things besides that special someone and im not 30 lol
    it made me smile to read this even tho as older i get my age becomes less funny lol :)

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Lol funny ending! love the wine rack stanza. Good to see some new stuff from ya!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    HAHA this made me giggle, particularly the last stanza.
    I thought you did a good job with this, it was humourous, the imagery was fun and the flow was good throughout.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    A good poem, nice flow and some meaning to it, and i liked the ending, good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Yay!!! =) lol this made me smile after reading such a sad poem... you are an amazing writer!!!!

    thanks again for entering my contest,
    Allanah 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    As I'm reading this, I'm thinking wow I have a lot to do to catch up. But then I got to the end and I was depressed. It's just around the corner.

    Still, a very humourous poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #5~
    Very simple poem that made me smile...very cute. And I love the irony of the last stanza. Heehee...don't we all dread the next decade milestone in age?! Very well put! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    It started reassuringly, implying that the age of 30 is one of your 'fruitful' years in life. =] It made me feel relieved, although I'm still 15! Haha. But the cocluding stanza only... well, made me think--nawww... Haha.
    Well, I guess that's how life is; a constant change.
    Love this adorable piece.
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Regret

    I loved the poem
    how you used your words and the flow was nice to
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Silly

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cute! How we all dread those next decade milestones...I actually remember a time when thirty seemed old to me...sigh...

    Well done piece...5/5 Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Haha I absolutly LOVE the ending!!