Very heart felt. I liked it.

I wanted to read this, because I hardly ever see "special events poems," so I was curious. I was in for a surprise, however, because my connotation of "special events" definitely wasn't this. I liked the juxtaposition of the calm field of daisies, with the tragic content. There were a few apostrophes and such missing, on possessive words, but I'm guessing you're just having the same problem with the scary black diamonds that I have.

I`m not sure that's the right category but it was an event like no other, a sad day for the world. Thank you ,fixed the grammar.

This is wonderful.. and its true cause no matter how bad you feel for the victims families nothing you say can help them ease the pain of losing a loved one in such a terrible way. This was a beautiful poem and very heartfelt.. And although this is a horrible thing it will never be forgotten.. nice work.

Excellent poem, i loved it, the flow was excellent and it was full of meaning, good job.

So touching, and an unselfish poem, just wonderful! 5/5 i love it!

An excellent tribute to the sad tragedy, a great poem, good job.

your servant:
david

How sad this day was for everyone. Things happening in our world today make no sense to me. You have written a wonderful poem. Very heart wrenching. Brings on numerous tears. I just feel so hepless. I will continue to pray for all who perished in this senseless act, and for all the families who lost their loved ones.

I walked in a field of daisies
Lifted my hands to the sky
Not a single solution could I find
So I just knelt there to cry.

Excellent job on this.
Take care Cindy

Wow.

That's all I can say.

No corrections or anything... just...

Wow.

May the deceased rest in peace and the affected find peace in their souls.

10/5
~Stephen White

Wow that was really sad it almost made me cry but it was very nicely written

I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

I love how it maintained a serene atmosphere throughout the piece. It was very heartrending to read. I guess all I can do is hope for those innocent souls to rest in peace...

Thank you for sharing.

Deana,
I am so glad they had a featured writers thread in the club. Otherwise I wouldn't have followed up to find such great talent. This poem is amazing and touches the heart of every person, we are all victims of such tragedys. Great Job...5/5