Comments : Friday Night Beauty Queen

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Awwwwwwww E>
    dig it

  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    Shit, thats unreal.

    Could picture it all as it was happening. I like random pieces like that. It reminds me of a poem I wrote once called "She left him with half a glass of milk and a ham sandwich"... quite random stuff makes it more interesting.

    Cheers
    Mo

  • 16 years ago

    by purplified

    Yea I really enjoyed reading that and agree with with the above very powerful and unreal and truly fascinating =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Woooooooooooooow!!
    love it indeeeeeeeeeeed :)

    yours,
    ~gIrL~

  • 16 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Thats quite nice for a poem very descriptive but I don't see why its about life. Anyways its very descriptive and fascinatingly fictional.

    Nadia

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    That's so deep and strange but... It's great... what a weird thought... very interesting anyway... 5/5