My pledge

by David   Apr 22, 2007


It's in the morning.
It's cold and dark
Seems like forever
That you loved me with spark

I cry to myself
And take all the pain
Yet inside I being crippled
From all friends words,
They say in vain

So its time for some payback
Its time for revenge and hate
I slice down my arm
This time you're far too late

No one can help me now
You pushed me over the edge
All your taunts and words
So hear my last pledge

You're on your last warning
Next time I will inevitably break
This time I won't convince myself
It was my own mistake.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Joe

    T_T

  • 16 years ago

    by Gypsy

    I really liked it, it was very emotive
    I especially loved the last 2 lines, they were very final and a good ending.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, you had some very good lines in there, and the flow was impressive. Superb work, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Wheww, a lot of emotion in that. haha Great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Lovely!
    I don't know how a dark poem can be Lovely but this is.
    It was so deep.
    I loved it.
    5/5

    Amazing
    Elaine