Numb from karma

by Laybelled with a name   Apr 22, 2007


Undeserved pain
negative karmas a waste of time
left me unregained
cant find my irrelevant tears

my soul unknown
my personality stabbed
my flesh bruised
my heart, untouched

you are the knife
i am the flesh
i am the opinionated
person that you hate

i haven't done too bad
Ive never said anything
the angel provoked
will kill you once more

i am me
i am numb

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  • 16 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    The idea was ace.
    I agree with ^^ Her. lol
    But the content twas pretty good.

    Well done smellyy.<3

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was okay... but why is it a friendship poem?

    I like how this one is structured. Poetry reading is so much easier when it's structured. Remember to use apostrophes where needed. I also suggest capitalising at the start of each line - it looks much better.

    :]