Gidson (Acrostic)

by Debbie   Apr 22, 2007


Glaring upon the gallows of lurid flames,
I squinted listlessly towards your narrow frame.
Daunting chords marred the interior of my soul;
Sightless passion diminished by Reason's control.
Over hills and dales, I had trampled to Stygian shores!
Noosed by Death for this futile love... nevermore...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Great poem...i really like the vocab usage in this one...excellent job! i give you a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Wow very good i liked the use of wrds nicly written

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Sightless passion diminished by Reason's control.
    [[I love, love, love this line by it's description of "Reason". Beautiful.]]

    And I adore the last line.
    God, you make me breathless. I hate you. >.<

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    What a great piece of work. realy aggressive. and the real meaning of acrostic writing. i lovedit. it was aswesome.

    you deserve 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow this is really great. Seriously, it's beautifully written. Your choice of words in this piece make it so powerful. 5/5

    marcella

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