Comments : Blocked be the way

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This is soooooo sweet...
    oh my...
    i'm almost crying
    *trying to control herself*
    really, it is such a sweet poem...
    easy to relate to, also...
    5/5 for sure
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Sweet, and endearing. Really this was good I like the way some words rhymed, and the emtion was heartfelt. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Very heart felt and nice the girl would be proud to be the highlight of this piece

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Good try to uses of rymingh scheme in your this words. almost you have successfull in this. it was nicely panned take care 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lovely dreams I see
    That we will be free
    Some day we will be...
    Just you and me...

    ^^Wow Mohamed.these lines contain so much of hope...loved it!
    This one is so touching..simple yet powerful filled iwth faith and love
    =)
    5/5
    Great job!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    True words of love n honest feelings dipicted in this piece. nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a goodd poem, the flow was very well done the stanza was good. The images you described and the love you felt was very nice all around a good job Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I felt jealous now..lol
    But anyway besides that I should admit it was so sweet and touching
    I especially liked;

    Lovely dreams I see
    That we will be free
    Some day we will be...
    Just you and me...

    Take care my darling
    Love you
    Laura

    Ps:Check your pms

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is very beautiful piece, I truly enjoyed it.
    It's really simple but touching.
    Well done
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was so sweet and heart felt, i loved it so much, it was so nice. the rhyming was excellent, the structure was great and over all, it was nicely penned, 5/5 your such a talented writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krysten

    Beautiful poem. still some interruptions but again another great poem....keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This was a beautiful poem! you ould feel the poe mthe whole time! i loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a sweet poem.
    Great rhyming and emotions.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Aw, this was so beautiful. Wonderful rhymes and flow. I really enjoyed reading this, it was very heartfelt and touching. 5/5

    marcella

  • I loved the ending stanza it was so sweet and heartfelt.I wasn't crazy about the opening of it but the rest of it totally made up for it.It was very strong and emotional.Keep up the great work.I give you a 5/5 for sure.^-^

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Hey this is one gr8 poem....i did like the lst stnanza the best aswell:D...keep up the gr8 writes
    tk care
    bree

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Wow, I should write this down and give it to one of my gfs. Great poem, Very romantic and the ending was superb. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aww this is such a heartfelt poem...a great emotion piece of writing.. i really enjoyed it.

    the flow and rhyming were flawless... looks like you get another 5/5 from me..well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Your love poem are fantastic great job
    5

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is very simple but really well written. I love the story and the emotion. It's 5/5 from me!!!