Let Love Flow (Rictameter)

by Gem   Apr 23, 2007


Angels
Sent from heaven
To show how beautiful
Love can be. How it fills our lives
With so much happiness comfort and bliss
The most powerful emotion
They open up our hearts
And let love flow
Angels

*Gem*

Copyright©GemmaStott2007
05.31pm

Rictameter - A scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then
consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, 10 Then down again,
8, 6, 4, 2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I've tried this style a few times, but mine sucked lol. This was great though. Perfect to the form with a wonderful flow. Oh yea... I think this makes 15. :] Great poems! 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    I seemed to get this one better. This is a little better then the other one. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Great word choice Gem :)
    loved it && ive never seen one written like that before lol
    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is really cute. Actually, I envy you--in a good way hehe--because you always have ideas/thoughts which are adequate enought to be manifested in the form of poetry.
    "Twas a candid, sweet write. =]
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    How beautiful :) Loved your word choices.

    Take Care Love Cindy