More Than Love (collab)

I like this poem it has a nice rhythem to it almost lyrical

Wow is all i have to say. this poem leaves you speechless. i can completely relate to the emotion this poem expresses, thank you for putting it into words. 5/5.
xxoo darling
-jess

Ah, wonderful and well written! I love this poem. The flow was flawless. I couldn't really find any mistakes or any grammar errors. Well done! Check out my two latest poems if you don't mind. God bless 5/5
<3Tay^__^ily

Celestial patterns, you in me
In emptiness I cease to be
Within our hearts a love divine
More than love, our souls align
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Beautiful, Beautiful stanza !
The ink of love flows through each line and leaves a breath taking mark upon the readers heart ....
Wonderful collab an excellent read

Luanne

Very nice poem!!