Comments : Simple Life

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Very intresting poem, however i dont agree with you as not being a Poet, cause you are a poet and a great one.........
    the meaning of the poem was just so touching as we are just another person of this earth, if we think about it.
    nice message.
    a 5/5 right out from my soul as you really deserve it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    Goran is right! You're a poet m'dear and this sorta proves it.. lol
    For an old one, it already has aspects of your trademark talents.
    Excellent
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    That has alot of meaning in it. i really liked it. Well done. 5/5
    Xx Chrissie
    ..thanks for the comment on my poem hun

  • 16 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    I like all your poetry...great work of art...please check out mine...

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow...really sweet..short,simple very wekll said dear..but lol..."I m not a poet"is not true..you r sure a great writer...this poem itself is a perfect example for your talent..i liked the way this one flowed...it had so much of meaning said with simplicity...very good write!
    Well done!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Yeah, this one I can understand lol =) This is nice ^^ YOU REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY *inhales* REALLY REALLY REALLY HAVE TALENT <3 ^^ hihi.

    xxx lots of love.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    A simple man of God,
    Who never breaks a word.
    Yet contented and happy,
    In simple thing I do.

    These lines are awesome. I would like you to make the "thing" plural if you dont mind. No body is perfect and all cant be a doctor or a scientist. In the light of this poem you have well proven this truth.

    Though this is an old piece, it flowed very well and the content in it is superb despite of the limited words. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    The whole peom is pretty awesome hun
    there really isnt a negative thing i could say about this one...
    i love it, like i love how you can like instead of describe what it is, describe what its not.. you know what i mean??.. i thought that was really neat and original
    awesome :)
    <3 ang