Debbie
beautiful formed poetry. Excellent word choices. This really was a great piece.

Take Care Cindy

Excellently done m'dear

The flow as flawless it was like reading water the way the words slipped effortlessly over the toungue.
The vocab is astounding, how do you think of these words??
Brilliantly written sweets, the form was mastered perfectly and for a first attempt, it's amazing
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Excellent vocab here - very developed. The flow seemed to be perfect; completely flawless.

It was interesting to read a new style of poetry for me.

Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it.

Ive never heard of this style, but u did excellent debs, i love the flow, i give it a 5/5!!! keep up the good work!!!

I really enjoyed it! Mostly because I have a very strong vocabulary and there were words in here I didn't know which was really cool. I really enjoyed the descriptions they were perfect.

Cool poem. I really liked it, it has great rythem and word choice. I love nature poems. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Wow.. never seen that before... once i learned what the words meant it was really cool.

Get writing some more you!!!
*Gem*

Your first pantoum? Beautiful....amazing...what vivid images you conjour in your words! Every verse more tantalizing than the last...

As the eye of heaven flutters from sleep,
Forbear this naught in inspiring bliss!
Whilst daunting chords wrought dryads to weep,
Fragrance sieges senses through a kiss.

^Everything about this is outstanding...my favorite verse!

Keep writing Debbie...no matter the style you choose, it is always a delight to read! All the best, Debbie

Wow, some thing different here, this is my first time to read this style of poem and i really enjoy it cause you wrote it greatly....... like always your poems are greater than great to me...... you are an amazing writer.

This was quite a beautiful read debbs, I really enjoyed this nature poem and it was a pleasure to read it. Well done on a nicely written poem you have here.~mel

Well done! Excellent poem, i lve your style always unique in all o your poems, great job, keep it up.

MAkes me wana go outsside! love it

Excellent poem as every one said... You've used strong words... This poem is really good and well described!

Excellent choice of words!...very unique!...descriptive!excellent penmanship!...loved it!
Easy 5/5..u desrve it!
xxPoojaxx

Great poem i love this but im not sure what a myrrh is:S:S well aside from that i found this poem super awesome lol good job and thx for the comment

keenan

Great poem.
Seems very hard, a pantoum.
I think you did it very good.
Great piece of writing
I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Good job nice word choice!