I enjoyed this. Instead of being over politiciony (bah, if even there is such a word>.<) you used a nice combination of two topics in one. It's good. I'll read som e of you others and leave feedback as well.
this was pretty enjoying. i liked the flow and i like the idea you are persueing. being "free" holds alot more weight in our society now than it did years ago. having to conform has become a drastic endevor for alot of communities.
I love this poem.
I didn't understand the title at first
But when I read your poem it was like
It was amazing.
I wish I could give you some constructive
But there's none to give for this poem.
Very nice poem... though the flow is a little off sometimes (so are some of mine as well...lol) what you say is wonderful, it makes people think, but i think you don't need the description of the poem in the end...the poem itself says everything...
I gave this poem a 5/5 because I believe the same thing. I believe in nirvana (not the band, the true meaning. lol) , and this country lacks it. We think we're free, yet be have sooo many boundaries. Very good!