Comments : The Bodys' Rain

  • 10 years ago

    by Suzi Ryan

    Thats really really really good!! i like it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sole

    I really liked this poem, however I feel that

    What is tis feeling; should be What is this feeling

    and
    99 times out of 100, should be written with words and not numbers. Well expressed poem. I liked it.

    Sole. x

  • 10 years ago

    by Christie

    So deep!! aww

    i was reading it, and just thinking: its so true.. so true.. =P

    a few times the flow was a little off, but EXCELLENT poem. =]

    5/5 from me!!
    xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by NashvilleBlues

    That's deep. And the sad thing is that it's true though. Very good thought out ideas, and I agree with you.

    *nods agreeing with Christie* the flow was a little off in some parts but it was an excellent poem!

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Mark Harris

    It makes sense and it's good! Keep it up :D!

    xo Harris.

  • 10 years ago

    by Neme juste un jouet

    I enjoyed this. Instead of being over politiciony (bah, if even there is such a word>.<) you used a nice combination of two topics in one. It's good. I'll read som e of you others and leave feedback as well.

    AELE

  • 10 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Very creative and great deliver of words! seems so differ to other poet i read before!

  • 10 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Good write!
    this was pretty enjoying. i liked the flow and i like the idea you are persueing. being "free" holds alot more weight in our society now than it did years ago. having to conform has become a drastic endevor for alot of communities.

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This peice was so powerful, The words you used amazing. The meaning excellent.
    I loved it so much it was such a captivating read.
    Well done
    Elainex

  • 10 years ago

    by Startle Me

    UGH!
    I love this poem.
    I didn't understand the title at first
    But when I read your poem it was like
    BAM!
    It was amazing.
    I wish I could give you some constructive
    Criticsm.
    But there's none to give for this poem.
    5/5
    Girly-o :]

  • 10 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    Great Poem...I really enjoyed the:

    "The political over rated world, does nothing at all,
    For the powers are meant to bring happiness (it failed).
    The wealthiest country in the universe,
    Cant even make the most normal girl smile."

    Very moving and oh so true! great job and keep it up, 5/5. -Unattractive1

  • Wonderful poem. You potrayed it well.
    The flow was excellent and the word choices were great.
    Keep it up 5/5

    |Sarah|

  • 10 years ago

    by tyanna

    Aww..such a good job hun...flow was off a little in places but the meaning was well expressed and clear..Great write hun.. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 i really liked how you put it together. it was really stong and powerful. excellent job.

    i loved the 1st and 4th stanza. Anything after the 4th was very well done and just as amazing. <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Columbus Firefighter

    Wow, Never has a poem made me stop and think like this one did. Your words display the leaders perfectly. good job. 5/5

    david,
    columbus firefighter.

  • 10 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    All i can say is, wow. a good poem with insite on a different point of view, an awesome read.

    your servant:
    david

  • 10 years ago

    by isabel

    Very nice poem... though the flow is a little off sometimes (so are some of mine as well...lol) what you say is wonderful, it makes people think, but i think you don't need the description of the poem in the end...the poem itself says everything...
    5/5

    *isabel*

  • 10 years ago

    by eXile

    This poem is awesome, makes people think. Changes lives. 5----

  • 10 years ago

    by Seronum

    Verr true, i have a few policital you can look at. Very great piece Power to the people!

  • 10 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I gave this poem a 5/5 because I believe the same thing. I believe in nirvana (not the band, the true meaning. lol) , and this country lacks it. We think we're free, yet be have sooo many boundaries. Very good!

    -Liz-