Beautiful Girl

by Artemis   Apr 24, 2007


Beautiful girl
With gorgeous eyes
A hidden world
Of hurt and lies

Beautiful girl
Full of soul
Nothing else now
She lost control

Beautiful girl
Hating her life
The last time now
She chose the knife.

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  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is simply great...
    I love this one though it's very sad
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by A girl broken until

    Its deep and meaningful but it needs to be longer if you know what i mean
    I dont feel it when its like this
    if it was longer and had rythym i think it would be great
    You got the right idea
    keep working on it