Okay...I frikken adore this!!!
Oh wow, I think for once I am speechless haha
The opening was so beautiful, with each stanza better than the last, the imagery was wonderfully done, it made me feel all peaceful and relaxed, and made me smile.
The flow was flawless as always, and the wording was such a pleasure to read.
I think this is by far one of your best!

I loved it.
The imagery was great. And the flow was excellent.
Your word choices was wonderful.
Beautiful poem 5/5

|Sarah|

Another wonderful piece, ma'dear! I especially liked the third and fourth stanzas; they were rather creatively and vividly stated. Considering some of your "ancient" works, I can safely infer that your imagination is stirred and enchanted by these my mythical creatures. (If I'm mistaken, my bad. Haha!) I was rather intrigued by this piece, I must say. You ALMOST had the idea of the Unknowable--something deeper and more profound, whereas you never intended it to be like one (I guess). Anyway, I should stop babbling now. I really like this poem because, for me, there's something special between its lines.
Keep them coming!
Love,
Debbie

Heeeey i loved this one :)
faries are so kwl, it had such a nice feeling to it, and the flow was great too :)
as always Gem 5/5

~*~Jen~*~

Gem
What a beautiful and delightful piece you have penned. Excellent job!

Those that are lucky to catch a glimpse
Are touched by magic and freed from pain
They've opened their eyes, minds and hearts
And their lives will never be quite the same

The imagery is really wonderful.
Take Care Love Cindy

Beautiful....magical....very imaginative imagery

Fairies can be seen where flowers bloom
And where a tree embraces the skies
Where rivers make a path to the ocean
And whenever a small child sighs

Love this verse....5/5 Debbie

Very beautiful... Great imagination... Well done!!

Wow...and that can't even sum this poem up! This was amazing, the imagery was flawless and the picture it painted in my mind was amazing. You have a talent Honey, and I hope to see you embrace it. =)

5.5

Great imagery it was wonderful...inspiring...

5/5

I found this poem really good itsl ike a childrens poetry book seriously you ahve talent be careful no one steals yourwork hun :D

please r/r/c 'The bodys' rain' thanx
xxx alex xxx

This is an amazing poem. Very nice work!

Magical [=

This was one of the best I've read. Yes, I agree that the imagery was just beautiful. I really love how you can take any topic and write a sensational piece in various poetry styles. You should really be proud of this.
You're very inspiring.

I loved this :) i used to be obsessed with faeries when i was little this reminded me why
5/5 it was great

Wow, i loved this one , its so beautiful .As child i always belived there are fairies out somewhere,lol i cant say how much i belive now.But this poem brought back those sweet memories.

Take care
chavii.

Wow... this is so mystical! great job... such a lovely child's poem! I cold read this to my little sister! great work!

Fascinating scenery. I enjoyed it. I won't worry about tomorrow and the day after....smiling!

Now I wanna go to Fairy World... :P

Aw i believe in fairies and i imagine their world to be just like this. Peaceful and no evil. Fab poem, brought a smile to my face:)

Kelly
xx