How I wish the Mystic did not have to die :( It is a sad life to spend alone. Excellent job on all three parts. Imagery and word choices and flow were all excelent. Loved the story. So much talent.
His broken heart, his dagger's home
No life if it's to be alone
Tears in blood upon the sand
The mystic took his Angel's hand
Hate to see it end:(
In death he found his love.
Love you Cindy
This trilogy is one of the best I have ever read! The flow, imagery and word choice are impeccable. A beautifully penned sad love story. At least the mystic found his angel in the end. I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!
Oh i'm now sad that the trilogy is over. These were amazing. I don't even know what I could say that would even begin to sum up how I feel about these...I loved every one of them, the concept, the content, imagery wording and flow...You did an amazing job on all three poems. These are perfect and I wouldn't change a thing with any of them.