Comments : Fallen Angel Part III

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Oh Debbie
    How I wish the Mystic did not have to die :( It is a sad life to spend alone. Excellent job on all three parts. Imagery and word choices and flow were all excelent. Loved the story. So much talent.

    His broken heart, his dagger's home
    No life if it's to be alone
    Tears in blood upon the sand
    The mystic took his Angel's hand

    Hate to see it end:(
    In death he found his love.
    Great Job!
    Love you Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This trilogy is one of the best I have ever read! The flow, imagery and word choice are impeccable. A beautifully penned sad love story. At least the mystic found his angel in the end. I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was powerful so descripitive 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Mmmmmm.......

    His broken heart, his dagger's home
    No life if it's to be alone
    Tears in blood upon the sand

    The Mystic took his Angel's hand
    hold my hand walk with me...?

    6/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Mystics never die....

  • 10 years ago

    by Poeta

    Oh, that is so great. What a great piece you have here. The imagery was so great, I can just see the Mystic now. *tear* Wonderful job! ^.^

    Heartz!

  • 10 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Omg, omg, omg, this was frikken brilliant!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Hrtbr8ker89

    I felt the emotion in this and it was rather sad....

  • 10 years ago

    by chavii

    The story is very intense, very captivating.Excellent write.Enjoyed reading it.

    Regards
    chavii.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    What a heart wrenching portrayel..
    I'm speechless Deb.. this trilogy is outstanding..
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Wow. i likeyy

  • 10 years ago

    by Louis

    Very beautifully written, without (noticeable) errors of syntax. You managed to keep my interest till the end. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh i'm now sad that the trilogy is over. These were amazing. I don't even know what I could say that would even begin to sum up how I feel about these...I loved every one of them, the concept, the content, imagery wording and flow...You did an amazing job on all three poems. These are perfect and I wouldn't change a thing with any of them.