Comments : Sensual Sunflower

  • 16 years ago

    by Bogie

    A sexy read indeed, youre written
    words say what the photo shows
    beauty, thought, flowers and
    sunsets.
    Excellent job and write on,
    Bogie

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on this poem. Full of passion. Imagery is wonderful.

    the sun warms my skin
    wine soothes my throat
    daydreaming of my lover
    in a rythmic love boat

    This stanza really paints a picture for the mind :)
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    Whisk me away
    oh sunflower of delight
    rock my senses
    into the moonless night
    ^^^^ i really like this line man, i can dig the poem.