Bill
I really loved this write of yours.

Defying the odds and pushing the limits
I will live my life hammer down
Until I can live my life no more...

These lines say it all.
Take care your friend Cindy

Wow. I truly loved this poem. It was..amazing, and that doesn't even sum it up. I think this should be under inspirational, it brought a tear to my eye thinking about how I've lived my life in the past and knowing it's time to change, and this is really inspiring.

"I have watched too many crash and burn
The fast lane consuming them along the way..."

^^ Those lines were very captivating.

5.5

Excellent poem bill, nice flow and wording was great, makes me think, but a great write good job, your friend Tracy 5/5