Comments : What Love is

  • 10 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    The ending is very cliche'
    But I sdtill LOVED it!
    I like cliche' poems.
    You wont find it hard to fit in here.
    And I'm glad you've joined us :)
    This poem was very smooth to read.
    GREAT!

  • 10 years ago

    by Seronum

    Very good, I think love is just that. now let everyonelse know! lol

  • 10 years ago

    by Darien

    Haha, yeah that is pretty much love in a nutshell. Good job on this poem, it's very true for the most part.

  • 10 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Again room for improvement but very lovley lol you still have great potential :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Aww. thats cute. short but sweet.. flow was great very good. keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Faded

    I liked the repetition and ur word choice was excellent, showed how u felt and your emotions. great work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Austin

    The repetition was wonderful i loved this poem. Short sweet and awesome!!! great job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    The fact that you used 1 Cor. 13 as your basis in writing this is quite charming. I really like that! Kudo's

  • 10 years ago

    by honeypot

    Hey, again nice use of rhythm here ( i really gotta learn how to spell that word as i use it so much)
    Love is YOU, you are a LOVEly chap by the sounds of it :-)
    Well done! I could imagine this message as an inscription in a valentines day card.The world could share your vision.

    Nice work ! x

  • 10 years ago

    by Alesia

    Aww! It was really cute! Everyone has a different way of putting love into text, but you got the basics and I think that's what makes this poem really beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    O believe if i had to tell someone what love is i'd lead them to this good poem. good job

    your servant:
    david

  • 10 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    So me and my friends have been going back and fourth about what love is....u just covered it. great poem :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I couldnt agree more, this should almost go under the defination of love. Nice write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tiffany Nichole

    Wow i love this poem! it's very good!

  • 10 years ago

    by isabel

    Very well written poem...
    the flow is really good and the message is wonderful...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 10 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    You have described your topic well..nicely done with ideas!

    keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Beautiful
    I love it
    Keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Yeah that was all true! and i 100% agree this line

    Love is patient, love will wait,

    great thoughts and expressing about love.. . and i think its dedecated to everyone! love it 5/5

  • It's a pretty good poem. Although it seemed a bit forced. the repetition in this kind of killed it and I kind of lost interest. Maybe putting this into other ways that you can tell what love it. It's good though. 4/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 9 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    This is so true!! i wish i could send it to all my friends!! thanx for posting it!! :):)