Nice conclusion. It's a good piece. Wish you had delved more into personality traits and stuff that you'd changed but otherwise. good job!!!
Charisma*

Gem
Great job on this. As we age and look back at how we change, the things we do and think do change so much. We don't even see it cominig :) You have captured this very well.
Take Care love Cindy

That was really good. I sometimes look back at who I was (personality and appearance) and I'm amazed at who I've become. Reading your poetry and of course seeing your lovely picture up top, definitely defines what a wonderful, caring, loving and pleasant person you are.
Great job and good luck on this poem.

Wow...thats pretty rockin' I like the meaning to it...''gorgeous!!!" lol

You rocked my face off :) 5/5

Very nice, lol no wonder we gals always feel this way.Great write dear.

Take care
chavii.

Aww wow i liked this one Gem ^_^

i can see where this poem comes from and its a rather popular feeling :))

5/5

~*~Jen~*~

Amazing how the teenager transforms into the young adult...almost like the difference between the caterpillar and the butterfly....Nicely written and heartfelt....5/5 Debbie

I love this song by Relient K. Very awesome title use.

The message is very moving. Nice!

You better win that contest! i know everyone feels like this...I only feel bad for the people who have to say: "Who I am hates who I've been, because when I look in the mirror, they're one and the same"

That was so incredible, Gem. I love your work so much. This is how I wish I could right. It's just right on in every aspect...it's creative, original, imaginative, descriptive, flows well, and anything and everything else. Great job, girl! :)
~Midnight Sun

This was so beautiful!
I loved the ending stanza, I thought it had great impact.

A very interesting poem, I liked the idea about 'who i was hates who i am'...... Makes it sounds there is an inner you somewhere. Excellent work, keep it up.

Omg thats awesome, I dunno if I'll ever look back at myself like that. I like who I am now and I think I'll be proud of myself in the future. *5*

This ones cool. I love the ending.

Omg gem, i was just thiking this the other day! Gawd i love this! Good to know people feel the same way too. [[=

I love the ending..do you listen to Relient K?
The last line is the name of one of their songs. Excellent write darling!

This is nicely written.. although its kinda sad.. you have nice poems i think im gonna go read more of them

This is amazing still lol you are really good. i like the story in it, very mature and provacative. keep it up

I like the creativity of this one. Very well written and the ending was great. Wonderful flow as well. 5/5

marcella

I dunno why I haven`t read this one before. You did an amazing job on this, as always. This title was one that I tried for and I couldn`t get anything out of it, but you did a wonderful job on it. At first, I didn`t know how you were going to tie the title in, but you did it and I was taken aback. An amazing ending, great job.

5.5
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