Comments : Sapphire Display (Minute poetry)

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    I love your formed poetry. This one is really beautiful.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Yes, so...beautiful is this poem.
    Unique and exquisite in its own way,

  • 10 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Even the most shortest poems you can make so great, i like the form you have wrote in making it different and unique :)

    Your greatest fan ^^

  • 10 years ago

    by chavii

    This poem is real treat to mind, such beautiful imagery, a master piece.

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jen

    Wow loved the word choice, all your structured poems are just soo good ^_^

    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 10 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Nice job! You always conquer so many forms of poetry. For that I applaud! Beautiful poem!
    Charisma*

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Ah! How refreshing this piece is! The fact that you used minerals/jewels as descriptions to the "subject," as well as on your other pieces, is rather captivating in a way that leaves the reader in a delightful trance. I like this piece very much! Keep it coming, ma'dear! Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh this was so pretty!
    It created very vivid pictures for me and the wording was a joy to read.

  • 10 years ago

    by Alex

    This one reminds me of the ocean. I wish I lived on the beach.

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, truly amazing, unique style and well written, loved the ending.

  • 10 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Once again Gem, you amaze me! To the point and totally beautiful!

  • 10 years ago

    by Milo

    This was extraordinary, i loved rythem. keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Wonderful poem:) I could almost see it. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats on winning the weekly poetry contest...this piece is excellent in every way! Great job on the form!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    I loved this form of poetry,, good job!! Congrats on winning the weekly poetry contest!!
    Janaynay

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Omg! Congratulations, hunnie!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem Congrats on the win. Beautiful poetry :)
    Love Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    Beautiful poem hun

  • 10 years ago

    by sarah

    Awsome poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Chad Campbell

    Very rythmic, and imaginative. Great vocabulary!