The haunted and forbidden shore

by The Angel of Secrets   Apr 25, 2007


Above, and beyond the worlds last end,
There is a place, abandoned, for souls to send.
Beyond the peace, and beyond the war,
There lies a forbidden and haunted shore.
This is where the destructed souls wait,
For their final ending and their final fate.
This is where one can scream, one can yell,
one can cry tears of blood, no one will tell.
Here you feel no thirst, no hunger for food,
There is no happiness, and no form of mood.
Deaths angels fly above the sky,
In a soaking black dress, they fly in the high.
Looking for those who shall not live no more,
Those who they can push, down hells door.
Those who have nothing, no good, only sins,
And when they find them, the flames begins.
They burn the bodies, as for mercy they scream,
And afterwords there comes a light, overwhelming beam.
The Angels of Life have come to claim their souls,
They have come to get the ones that reached their goals.
Those who have done the good, deserved their spot,
In heaven they shall be, not the blazing hot.
They leave the others in flames, the evil remain,
They leave the tears, and the darkness's rain.
They fly away to heaven, to God's paradise,
Where the angels wait, with smile as white as ice.
There, with their halos, they peacefully stand.
"Welcome to the Pearl Gate" they say, "to God's perfect land."

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very effective, greatly written with vivid imagery.
    My favorite part is:
    -This is where one can scream, one can yell,
    one can cry tears of blood, no one will tell.
    Here you feel no thirst, no hunger for food,
    There is no happiness, and no form of mood.-
    I like the ending very much, it is effective.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is truly excellent, the word choice and flow are perfect and the imagery is very vivid. We really can't ever know for sure whether or not heaven and hell exist util we actually get there, until then just live each day as if it were your last. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was amazing. it was beautifully written, the flow was great the structure was just spectacular and it was just great, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I like this one. It is powerful and well written, title is also great. I did not like the ending. I not prefer religion things in poems. But rate is 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Wow htisp oem gave of a osrt of aura lol loved it it was so well written i was glued literally lol.

    xxx alex xxx

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