Oh this was very dark. it was very 'emo'tional and dark. yet this poem. it is very worthy of a vote of 5. if i could choose i would give in a 10. or a 20. or a 100! this was truly excellent.

5/5 David

This really is a great poem. I just don't know what else to say. 5/5

Awww. Very sad.
It's a shame how people have
to live life so painful.
Great write! Keep it up!
God Bless 5/5
<3tay ^__^ily

Amazing poem, really sad, but is easy for me to relate to it...it is very deep and emotional...the choice of words make the reader feel like he/she is "inside the poem"...

5/5

*isabel*

This is such a great idea! This is definately one of my favorite poems by you so far. awsome concept- tears actually hide the pain, they don't reveal it.

Wow, I don't know what to say. that was amazing, the flow was great, like water. The word choice dripping with twisted emtions, dark, and sad, that was an ejoyable read. 5/5

This one is great..very beautifully penned..n very deep n touching peice filled wth emotions..Kp it up!
5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

Oooo nice one here. Very emotional and deep. :]

This poem was really easy to understand you wrote about something basic yet twisted it into an amazing piece of poetry. You created a powerful ending which made this poem finish nicely and definitly talked about a true topic. Great work~mel

Beautifully written sad poem, very deep and unique. You described emotions superbly, and I can relate to your words.
Well done 5/5

Very nicely written and beautifully worded. This is really a creative poem. 5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams

Wow this is one of the most amazing poem that i ever read here, you have done a great job capturing the emotions.

you are truly talented and deserve a 5/5 from me

This is amazing
i love you sandra

HOney..
if u ever feel like this again
u no u can call me
love
1/2 pint (lol)

This poem of yours is really deep i am glad that you can express yourself so freely if give me some relife to know that others out there in this forsaken world feel the same way
great read ans soon to be one of my favorites:~)Sam

This is a great one...I got the meaning right from the title and then you built upon the beautifully sad thought. Love it

OMG thats good love it

I really love this poem. It was amazingly written! Every part of this poem was flawless... Not to mention the word usage... astonishing! 5/5 for sure. Great write!

So sad, but so beautifully written. I love the way this piece is written. It seems to flow very well and the message hits home. Keep it up hunn. <3 Bethany

Omg it's beautiful