Absolutly Nothing .5

by Bryce   Apr 25, 2007


This is your left foot,
These are your right feet-
Your life is an output,
You don't have any sense of beat

Are these your legs?
Lets assume the stance
Don't make me beg
Shut up, lets just dance

This is not a dance floor
This is just life
This is not an exit door,
You can't stop mid-life

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  • 10 years ago

    by desiree

    You use excellent detail.
    & great rhymes..

    But i don't get the meaning... =-\
    4/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Beatrice

    Really great poem and I loved the flow. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Estefania

    Very nice! liked it

  • 11 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    I liked that one one and hwo u put dancing with it and discribed life very good

  • 11 years ago

    by ctmskm

    Nicely written, it rhymed well also. it seems like a storyline that has a lot of meaning still behind it. keep up the writing. "it helps"

    L8ter
    CtmSkh