Young Punk Love

by Sorefromreality   Apr 25, 2007


His arm around her waist,
With his studded belt in place.
A band tee covers his chiseled body,
"Three Days Grace."
As he reaches up,
To outline her pretty face.

Hot pink Converse on her feet,
She strums on her guitar.
He takes a few steps back,
But he's not going far.

A second guitar is produced,
Out of his beat-up case.
He starts to play with her,
And her heart begins to race.

Colorful bracelets line her arm,
As she keeps on playing.
He abruptly stops, and looks at her.
And her hand he begins taking.

She stops what she is doing
And looks into his eyes.
Brushes back his shaggy hair,
and begins to rise.

He sits up and stands there,
Under his sea of jet black hair.
She leans in and falls into his arms,
He didn't even need to use his charm.

They fall onto a grungy couch together,
He looks in her eyes and whispers,
"I'll Love You Forever."

Those words,
They gave her such a high.
She knew they couldn't be a lie.

Starting then, they shared an eternal bond.
As the music in the background, played on and on.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SweetZombiie

    I seriously like this poem..
    and after I read it, it was like a flashback
    of me and my ex boyfriend *tears*
    Good job! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    Oh wow. I LOVE this. The story is so unique. The flow was perfect, as was the rhyming. It wasn't forced at all. The attention to detail and description created wonderful imagery. I could see everything happening as it unfolded in this poem in my mind. This truely is amazing. Excellent job! =] 5/5

    Much love,
    Tammie xo