Oh wow. I LOVE this. The story is so unique. The flow was perfect, as was the rhyming. It wasn't forced at all. The attention to detail and description created wonderful imagery. I could see everything happening as it unfolded in this poem in my mind. This truely is amazing. Excellent job! =] 5/5

Much love,
Tammie xo

I seriously like this poem..
and after I read it, it was like a flashback
of me and my ex boyfriend *tears*
Good job! :)