Comments : The Crimson Cleric

  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Wow, the theme && topic are outstanding, I really feel like I was there. I love the line "Running through the field like a child". My only critisism would be the 4th stanza is a bit weak and wobbles the balance. Besides that it was great.

    {5/5}

    [PygmyPuff]