This is a great poem and it hits home for today 18 years ago I lost a great friend the man I loved very much he was amazing and I will never forger him ever for as I woke up this morning he was the first thing on my mind as the tears rolled down my checks thank you for the great poem 5/5

Beautiful poem, m'dear. I like your setup, and I enjoyed your word-use.
I didn't find that many errors, but the errors are small and I see mainly due to my OCD lol! Other than that, this is a well written poem. Good job, m'dear.

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~Stephen White

I read your poem and I did like it!