The Lucky Girl (Acrostic)

by BeautifulxMess   Apr 25, 2007


Two hearts beat into one with love burning in our veins.
Happiness is the only thing that our hearts feel inside.
Everything disappears when I hear your name.

Laying upon your chest holding your body to mine.
Under the covers we share our hearts to each other.
Caressed by your fingertips that touch my skin.
Kiss me with those tender lips that I long to have.
You see what I feel in my eyes when you look in.

Green eyes stare into my brown eyes that ignite.
In your hands, you're the only thing in my world.
Roads stretch a country mile for us to discover.
Looking at you, I know for sure I'm the lucky girl.

*I know, deffinatly not the best.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sole

    Nice poetry. Acrostics are definately not the easiest to write.

    'Green eyes stare into my brown eyes that ignite.'

    I loved that line. It was so beautifully written and carefully placed. Excellent.

    Sole. x

  • 16 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    I like it. great job :D