Comments : Perfected Friendship

  • I loved it.
    The rhyming wasn't forced and the flow was flawless.
    The imagery was great.
    Beautiful poem 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Lovly, amazing and simple, yet still had a lot of deapth! the creativeity and flow of the poem was clean and bautiful, amazing

    -----tara

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Beautiful poem and a great write. I loved this poem. I had a best friend through elementary and middle school but we just drifted to far apart. Anyways great poem 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow. So easily related to. :D
    It wasn't my favorite poem, only because the rhyme scheme. I love poems with perfect rhyming, Lol. But, this poem was GREAT, and it had a lot of meaning to it. Which I absolutely loved. I remember all those things with my best friend, as well.
    Except the whole high school part, we never made up.. Well, until three days ago. Lol.

    You did a great job, hun.
    Keep it up.
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Sole

    Another great piece of poetry. However, I understand the emphasis on the friendship, but I feel that you repeated the word 'friend' a few too many times, particularly in the last stanza. Still, another great write.

    Take Care - Sole.