Comments : Topaz Coloured Water (Palindrome)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    I love your formed poems. This one is beautiful :) The imagery is wonderful. You have an amazing talent.
    Take care
    love your friend Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Beautiful words.
    That's kinda sorta all I can say about this poem. It's not bad, it just... doesn't need a thing to be changed...

    Good job, m'dear.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Beautiful as always! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Ma'dear, this is a a beautiful piece. It's quite mesmerizing, I must say. I love the line where you stated that Beauty echo's Nature--simply wonderful. The rhythmic pattern of words gracefully, vividly flowed throughout. Ah! What else should I say? It's beautiful! Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Haha! Arrgh. Alright, alright, I'll start thinking of something to write. >_< Anyway, thank you. It's because of your insistent demands that I was able to get my lazy ass writing again. Pfft. Take care, hun!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    You sure have a gift for formed poetry =)
    I adore this piece, and though I imagine this form must be difficult, you make it look so effortless.

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    First it was the Rictameter and now its this!
    **gobsmacked
    :]
    You have too much talent, I must say Gem.
    Take Care aye.

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    OFFICALLY MY FAVORITE!!! GENSIS!!! SOOOOOOOOOO REFRESHING!!! AAAAH MUAH! haha...i love it..once again [o=

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent, your are very talented at formed poems, and i think you really outdid your self in this one, excellent work, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Very nature-listic or however you spell it. I really liked the picture you have going on in here. But its not my favorite out of your poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wonderful piece of mirrored poetry.It was beautiful. As always great imagery and word usage. 5/5

    marcella