Amazing poem, the words are beautiful and simple and cute yet sad and amazing....over all a good poem---tara

Great poem.. it really hurts if someone breaks your heart.. anyway flow was good. It was kinda but stick to the point! well done. I enjoyed reading your poem. and thanks for the comment ;)

Yet another lovely poem hun.
5/5.

Awe very cute/sweet poem!
5/5
It's one of those poems that evoke a strong image! great job!