I think you might have been metaphorically speaking about burnign them, or maybe not. anyway a really well penned fluent original poem. i enjoyed it so much. i think it was one of the best thought out poems i have read in a while.
I've actually read this poem about 5 or 6 times, and showed it to some of my friends. I love the description and the flow was absolutely perfect. It showed emotion and your hatred (along with no mercy) towards the ones that broke your heart as well as some humor. I can relate to how you feel from this poem and this is one of my favorite poems, that's one of the reasons why I added you to my favorites. Awesome job, and keep up the good work. 5/5
Really amazing...thats really all I have to say. There's so much wrath entwined in this...but its written with such depth and intensity it just ends up dark instead of being just angry and hostile. Excellent work! 5/5
This poem is very gory.
The beginning was okay
But the 2nd stanza was fantastic.
It got me stuck.
It will be your turn?
I was like....
I had to find out what's going to happen next.
I can pratically see the girl burning.