Comments : Burn Your Exes

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Hmmm, friend intresting wrk. I loved reading. U r in my favourite

  • 10 years ago

    by Seronum

    Holy crap man! thats awesome!!! i loved it!! reminds me of how i feel about my exes...id love to set them ablaze 5/5 Great Work!!

  • I loved this poem.
    The flow was flawless and the emotion was deep.
    I'm sure a lot people would like to burn their exes.
    Amazing poem 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 10 years ago

    by Julienne

    Wow, i loved this poem. simply because of the flow, the meaning, and how you pulled the emotions out and poured them so delicately into my ears... thanks its awesome!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by ALEX

    Oh wow. That's intense. I love it so much. Great job!

    ps-- i thought the flow was weird-ish in some places, but i'm told i have a strange way of reading poems. the part about the sky, in particular. i dont know. review it if you wish!

    still an amazing poem!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really interesting title and poem..the woridng was so eliminated and the topic
    I especiallly liked those

    Here comes the last girl, 'the user'
    She shall be the last burning loser
    In the end I smiled as I watch them go
    For they missed out and will never know

    Well done
    Take care
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Interesting...very interesting poem....lol great choice of words, the flow was perfect, it was a great poem! :D

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Ah, really exes are the worst. Expecially they're the ones that made your relationship horrible. This poem was somewhat humor but sad. Keep up the great write! God Bless 5/5
    <3tay^__^

  • 10 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    The first and last stanzas were effected use of repition.
    Although the rhyming method isn't what i like to read best I didn't mind it so much.
    And I agree BURN YOUR EXES!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Greg Beam

    Wow thats amazing! the flow was perfect and the wording was great. there is a lot of meaning to this poem. keep up the great work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Fabulous work,,,!

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    Deep emontion and little humor mixed. Amazing poem and i liked the flow :) Keep up the great work :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I think you might have been metaphorically speaking about burnign them, or maybe not. anyway a really well penned fluent original poem. i enjoyed it so much. i think it was one of the best thought out poems i have read in a while.

  • 10 years ago

    by Teria

    I absolutely loved this.
    "A bright light glowing from 'the faker'
    As she burns with 'the heartbreaker'
    Combined they light the night sky
    A pleasant treat for one's eye"
    ^ My favorite stanza. :D

    This poem is easily related to, I believe. Many people feel this way, and a lot do it. I liked how you put it into words though, I don't think I've ever seen a poem like this, or even on this subject.

    You did a great job, keep it up.
    <3 Teria.

  • 10 years ago

    by Faded

    I've actually read this poem about 5 or 6 times, and showed it to some of my friends. I love the description and the flow was absolutely perfect. It showed emotion and your hatred (along with no mercy) towards the ones that broke your heart as well as some humor. I can relate to how you feel from this poem and this is one of my favorite poems, that's one of the reasons why I added you to my favorites. Awesome job, and keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    I loved it, excellently written, the flow was good and you stayed on track all the way, keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very well written, Deep and yet extremely dark and bitter... Burning exes is definitely an option I'm sure everyone wished they had....
    Good Job though.
    5/5
    -Lisa.

  • 10 years ago

    by carissalynn

    DAmnnn, BURN YOUR EXES...dude, wens the riot?? i am their alll the way! LOVE IT...hehe, i have so many, may take a while..baha

  • 10 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Really amazing...thats really all I have to say. There's so much wrath entwined in this...but its written with such depth and intensity it just ends up dark instead of being just angry and hostile. Excellent work! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Wow.
    This poem is very gory.
    The beginning was okay
    But the 2nd stanza was fantastic.
    It got me stuck.
    It will be your turn?
    I was like....
    I had to find out what's going to happen next.
    I can pratically see the girl burning.
    ECK!
    Bad imagery.
    5/5